Posts filed under 'Wonderful writing'
50 Word Stories
THE POLICE WERE AFTER ME, OR WERE THEY!!
“Exuse-me, exuse-me.” The police yelled out as they chased me around the corner. I wasn’t happy because there’s a lot of corners in this town. ” pull over with your hands up.” They yelled.” Never” I yelled back. Not you they said, the one in front of you.”
” I knew that.”
I don’t think that this story is good so can you tell me how to inprove it!
Bad hair day!!
“No! Amelia yelled, My hair is a mess and it’s photos today.” “Mum” she said.” Yes honey” her mum replied. ” My hair is a mess, she said. “ And” her mum asked.” It’s school photos today” Amelia screamed. ” I’m sure it will get better,” she said. Then suddenly……………her hair was neat.
2 comments August 12, 2008
Nursery Poems!
HUMPTY DUMPTY!
Humpty dumtpy sat on a wall
Humpty dumpty had a great fall
And all of the kings horses and all the kings men
Said “stuff him his just an egg”!
LITTLE MISS MUFFET!
Little miss muffet
Sat on her tuffet
Eatting an apple pie
She keept on eating untill she……….finaly DIED!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Add comment August 4, 2008
The Wizard of Oz!!
On the 31st of July 2008 grades 3 to 6 at Horsham west p.s went to the cinema’s to watch the Wizard of Oz, performed by the collage! In class the next day 4ob got to colour in ether the Tin Man, the Scarecrow or Dorothy. I chose Dorothy.Dorothy sang really, really well. She sang in high voice, and low voice. One of the things I liked waswhen ever people said something wrong they keep-ed on talking like nothing had happened.The starting was brilliant because the music started to get our atention (and it did) Then when the music finished the curtains went up very fast that it scared most of the people. I also liked the lion.As soon as the lion came on I could tell that it was Lucus.The performance was terific and I thank the collage students for performing it for the few school’s that came to see the wonderful show.
5 comments July 31, 2008
Mrs. Blakey’s Secret Fun!
My class 4ob had a lot of fun making our hands into a cruel gang. Mrs. Blakey told us what to do because we have been going onto her website and finding fantastic things to do. She didn’t put hand up on her blog so it was a secret.
3 comments July 29, 2008
My Amazing Holidays!!
On Wednesday 3rd of July I went to my Grandma’s house. I went with my brother Mark, my sister Jasmine and my two cousins Josh and Amie. We went to grandma’s because my other sister Karen was going to see her dad. We stayed the night and in the morning we went home. On the 12th I went to Kids capers. I saw two old friends from dancing and I saw my bowling partner. She was with Marks friend Jamie. We were glad that they turned up when they did because we were leaving. That night I went bowling with my mum. I was filling in for Shirley. Over all we came a draw, 8 all.
That’s pretty much all I did on the holidays so bye. Keep looking at my blog.
1 comment July 15, 2008
Mucking around on my blog!!!
Wow there is a lot to do on blogs. I didn’t know were to start, but first I looked at all of the titles and subtitles on the top of the page. I went onto the title that said comments. So when-ever I go onto my blog, I look at how many comments I have. I only have two comments but it has only been 4 days since I got my blog.
Keep looking at my fantastic, amazing, terrific blog.
4 comments June 27, 2008
